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[mildredtabitha]

This is the link to my blog. I haven't been active this year but there are enough posts that can help you to review it. What improvements do you think I should make?
Comments and criticism will be highly appreciated.

 

[ThulfWaatu]

One last thing. Can you suggest s nice colour or theme. I can't think of any. Please reply this time in atleast 5 sentence. The many words confuse me. I also haven't understand what you are saying about the content. I feel my head spinning when I try to understand the message ftom that long explanation.

Seems like I'm going at it with too much sophistication and you're unable to absorb the details because of that. I don't think there's any way around it - there are basically 2 options. 1) read slowly, no rush; 2) ignore the wall of text, very convenient (analogous to why some1 might skip the content on the website, you see)

Again, it's not so much about the content itself but rather how it's presented. If you can't get a visitor engage with the content, then there might as well not be any content at all, no matter how good or bad the content may be. And it's a well-know fact, even, that people, nowadays especially, have limited, some would say short attention span, so the first impression is your best chance of getting people invest their time in reading even just a little. From there, if the content was good, they'll keep reading, but if it's presented in a way they won't even read just a little, they'll leave before even having read a sentence. The devil is in the details.

Most of the other wall of text of mine was about my experience engaging with the site and the possible reasons as to why my engagement turned out the way it did, and also how my experience with the site changed over time the more I looked at it (the motive for engaging further was due to analysing it rather than engaging with it the normal way).

I mentioned how good the first screen looked like and then I mentioned how bland the second screen looked like. How when I scrolled down I felt the urge to leave the site. Words like "old" or "fear" are negative (negative emotions are stronger than positive emotions, so the positive emotions are overshadowed by the negative words like "old", "fear", therefor words like "let go" or "marriage" are instantaneously interpreted in a negative way), together with the dark ambient colors, made me feel sad. A sort of psychological mechanism, of course, tries to save me from those negative emotions by channeling it away from myself, there were 2 things I managed to notice: 1st one was the urge to leave the site asap, the 2nd was interpreting the situation in my favor, that the writer must be going through some tough times or something, but then I'd feel compassionate for the writer and the motive for reading further is something like helping you rather than getting from the content a solution to my problem (problem here means whatever "need" I might find a solution for in the content).

All in all, colours would help deliver the message, create a more positive vibe, bring forth positive emotions in readers. I can see that the content (not the titles) is "positive", but the ambience surrounding it is quite the opposite, dark and sad. What do you associate the words "old", "slow", "small", "fear" etc with? Perhaps changing the words alone would help the situation. I think there's a whole branch in psychology on how words affect our feelings, in it, how to turn negative words into positive as well, etc. But there's a branch for colors also, how colors affect feelings... Colors and words associate with certain things and situation that affect feelings. It's subjective in details, but sort of universal in general.

https://blog.red-website-design.co....y-how-your-logo-colour-affects-buying-habits/

 

[ThulfWaatu]

Following the wall of text, it's not the background color that's bad. You can totally use the dark background for maximum effect, but when the contrast is missing between the content and the background, it all becomes one. And if negativity dominates in one section, it kind of spreads to all the rest because it all looks the same everywhere else.

 

[Awan Cheyanne]

I'm not sure if you have changed your format to the blog recently. I see in the comments that people are talking about a black background blog. I see a white one now. I think that you need a different header or something besides that big green text box when you open the blog. A nice picture or something a bit more soothing would be great. Other than this the new layout looks good and it is nicely done.

 

[mildredtabitha]

I'm not sure if you have changed your format to the blog recently. I see in the comments that people are talking about a black background blog. I see a white one now. I think that you need a different header or something besides that big green text box when you open the blog. A nice picture or something a bit more soothing would be great. Other than this the new layout looks good and it is nicely done.

Yes I did change. The current one does not have a black header blocking the screen. The big "green" is because the post is featured. I would really like to be suggested a nice template I can find in blogger that would complement my blog. Besides the dull color that was there before, I do not know any bright colors. I felt the dull one complemented the mood of posts there.

Where do you mean the soothing picture should be?

Thanks for feedback

 

[Awan Cheyanne]

Yes I did change. The current one does not have a black header blocking the screen. The big "green" is because the post is featured. I would really like to be suggested a nice template I can find in blogger that would complement my blog. Besides the dull color that was there before, I do not know any bright colors. I felt the dull one complemented the mood of posts there.

Where do you mean the soothing picture should be?

Thanks for feedback

At the top of the page with your name on it or up in the top corner of it. I think a nice image at the top like a banner image and then make your text box a bit smaller and this would look so much nicer.

 

[mildredtabitha]

At the top of the page with your name on it or up in the top corner of it. I think a nice image at the top like a banner image and then make your text box a bit smaller and this would look so much nicer.

Thanks for suggesting this. I will make changes next week and probably add the banner too.

 

[Awan Cheyanne]

Thanks for suggesting this. I will make changes next week and probably add the banner too.

This would make it more relaxing, smooth and inviting. I think the way it is now sort of looks cold. I know the mood you have set and understand this. You could find a nice image to add here that will reflect this mood.

 

[xXInfectedXx]

The white background is that nice on the eyes. Consider adding a background to improve your blog. I don't like the featured green post at the top. My advice would be to remove that. Not many people have commented on your articles, try to promote your blog, through social media and get some activity so other people can read the articles that you write.

 

[mildredtabitha]

The white background is that nice on the eyes. Consider adding a background to improve your blog. I don't like the featured green post at the top. My advice would be to remove that. Not many people have commented on your articles, try to promote your blog, through social media and get some activity so other people can read the articles that you write.

Thank you for the review. I have been sharing it and I have had readers but with no comments. I will come up with a nice offer in the market place so I can get comments on my posts.

I did not understand about adding background and what about the white background. Please explain that part.

 

[Lovely]

it a feat thing that your blog is user friendly and fast loading too, why did you abandon the blog it a very unique niche,it content is quite different to me.please spare sometime for it,just book marked it will be reading it more often

 

[ThulfWaatu]

I must admit, the white backgroand has given the words with negative connotation in the black setting a different meaning, a more positive vibe.

 

[Gullyboy]

its a nice blog and you can try to post more Articles into it. I am sure I have visited that some weeks ago and I liked your writings and it was pleasure to check that and glad you are doing well, Good luck and keep it up.

 

[mildredtabitha]

I didn't abandoned it. @Lovely but I currently I have put it on private mode since I have been busy and haven't had extra time for the blog. I don't plan on working on it anytime soon. But once I do get back to it, I will update here. Since this time round, I would like to change everything about it.


Also, thanks@thesupersingh

Thanks for the feedback @ThulfWaatu

 

[Gullyboy]

I think if you own a blog and are serious about earning from it. Then you should leave it alone even for a day and you should try to update it whenever possible. Try to get more visitors on your blog and I'm sure you are aware of how much money you can make with it.

 

[ICTman1076]

I didn't abandoned it. @Lovely but I currently I have put it on private mode since I have been busy...

Personally, I think you should keep it up publicly. Then, new users like me won't instantly leave again, probably forever. If you leave it up, no matter how inactive you are, you'll get new people interested and when you come back to the blog you will have a good fan base to come back to.
I'm interested to know when the blog will come back, it seems interesting!

 

[mildredtabitha]

Personally, I think you should keep it up publicly. Then, new users like me won't instantly leave again, probably forever. If you leave it up, no matter how inactive you are, you'll get new people interested and when you come back to the blog you will have a good fan base to come back to.
I'm interested to know when the blog will come back, it seems interesting!

Okay. I have just returned it to public but no new posts yet. Enjoy reading :)

I think if you own a blog and are serious about earning from it. Then you should leave it alone even for a day and you should try to update it whenever possible. Try to get more visitors on your blog and I'm sure you are aware of how much money you can make with it.

I will try that soon but first I will need to change everything about it like try hosting services and even pay others to write articles for me. God willing

 

[msmoneybags]

I can not give you any kind of review, as the blog has been removed from the site, I get a "blog not found"

 

[imperator123]

Same information here, thread should be closed.