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[ekliyan]

Hello BMF friends,
Please review my site , Takitakibiz.com

Please Give me your feedback to make it better.

Do need more improvements? what are those?

Thank you for read my post

 

[zeljko]

I check your blog using Microsoft Edge and it really looks great, Loading speed good, links are good (I didn't find any broken). Especially I liked table of contents. It is very rare used on websites, mostly in documents. Good work.

 

[ekliyan]

I check your blog using Microsoft Edge and it really looks great, Loading speed good, links are good (I didn't find any broken). Especially I liked table of contents. It is very rare used on websites, mostly in documents. Good work.

Thank you friend.

 

[koliman]

Hard to see the numbers on the side of the Titles. Also, I don't like the circle's position maybe you can test out some arrows in the right and left of the image. The blog is loading fast. Your right sidebar is full of text/titles, try to add a Social counter for your social media accounts.

Plus you can add a newsletter sidebar widget if you want to get into e-mail marketing. The overall experience of your blog is really good!

Nice work.

 

[angelaB]

Hello BMF friends,
Please review my site , Takitakibiz.com

Please Give me your feedback to make it better.

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great blog! i really love that template how can i get one?

 

[sudden]

right at the bottom footer please change the tag from

Theme of Rigorous Themes_All Rights Received©2018-2019_TAKITAKIBIZ.COM

to something like

©2019 TAKITAKIBIZ.COM. All Rights Reserved

it just gives a more professional look when you remove the theme credit

 

[ekliyan]

Hard to see the numbers on the side of the Titles. Also, I don't like the circle's position maybe you can test out some arrows in the right and left of the image. The blog is loading fast. Your right sidebar is full of text/titles, try to add a Social counter for your social media accounts.

Plus you can add a newsletter sidebar widget if you want to get into e-mail marketing. The overall experience of your blog is really good!

Nice work.
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Thank you for your feedbeck

 

[ekliyan]

great blog! i really love that template how can i get one?

thank you for feedback
Search here Theme of Rigorous Themes you can check themes

 

[ekliyan]

right at the bottom footer please change the tag from

Theme of Rigorous Themes_All Rights Received©2018-2019_TAKITAKIBIZ.COM

to something like

©2019 TAKITAKIBIZ.COM. All Rights Reserved

it just gives a more professional look when you remove the theme credit

Thank you for feedback. i never remember that.

 

[salvi]

I like your web page and I think its much better than many web pages I have seen till now and I like the colour of your page as it is very standard and very clean to me.

 

[ekliyan]

I like your web page and I think its much better than many web pages I have seen till now and I like the colour of your page as it is very standard and very clean to me.

thank you friend.

 

[Enteng]

it is nice, never thought any negative feedback.

where you from?

you're great creating content.

does the theme applicable to blogger?

i am new to blogging and your blog inspires me, i need to study more how to make my blog good looking as yours

 

[Enteng]

although by reading carefully your articles, their are some minor errors. i dont know how to say, some are incorrect grammars.. but every article is uniquely arranged. its like a book or something. its very good

 

[ekliyan]

it is nice, never thought any negative feedback.

where you from?

you're great creating content.

does the theme applicable to blogger?

i am new to blogging and your blog inspires me, i need to study more how to make my blog good looking as yours

Hello @Enteng
Thank you for your feedback.
I'm from Sri lanka.
That template is applicable for wordpress sites. If you can start your blog with Wordpres. It I also worked with blogger, then i move to wordpress. has lot of advantages more than blogger.

 

[ekliyan]

Thank yo

although by reading carefully your articles, their are some minor errors. i dont know how to say, some are incorrect grammars.. but every article is uniquely arranged. its like a book or something. its very good

u for your feedback. i am not a 100% Fluent in English. i got support from Grammarly tool to correct my mistakes. looks like it is not 100% support for me. There can be some minor errors. If you notify some serious error please msg to me.

Thank you very much for your support and feedback.

 

[vizta]

Hello BMF friends,
Please review my site , Takitakibiz.com

Please Give me your feedback to make it better.

Do need more improvements? what are those?

Thank you for read my post

Your site is good as to its contents and its design you made. People use more mobiles now a days, your site well built for mobile platform too.... It is very sensitive that you opted the good theme for that... I liked it bro...

 

[ekliyan]

Your site is good as to its contents and its design you made. People use more mobiles now a days, your site well built for mobile platform too.... It is very sensitive that you opted the good theme for that... I liked it bro...

Thank you for your feedback bro..

 

[ThulfWaatu]

I feel like the titles are too long.

I don't know where you're getting your traffic from. Perhaps your aim is not to get organic traffic to begin with and perhaps you've opted for other sources. In the latter case, I guess the title length doesn't matter all that much.


As for some topics, tackling insurance probably won't get you far.

I may be wrong, but from my own experience, even as little as "safety tips" won't rank for shit (this is assuming you're trying to get organic traffic). It's because of how Google works, has worked for a few years now actually (resource). Perhaps in order to circumvent this problem, you could make it sound more personal, simple and practical. Right now it sounds like far-fetched overview and/or gauging of the potential issue, almost feels like typical troubleshooting tips that never work.


There are more potential issues, but there's plenty to fix so far...


Don't take any of this personally... This is just my unbiased observation not held back by "feelings".

 

[Enteng]

Thank yo

u for your feedback. i am not a 100% Fluent in English. i got support from Grammarly tool to correct my mistakes. looks like it is not 100% support for me. There can be some minor errors. If you notify some serious error please msg to me.

Thank you very much for your support and feedback.

I see, your welcome bro! lets see what else i can find. Im not good in english too. And i think you'll get better and better. keep reading your posts from time to time and you will see the error.

I think you really know much about the stuff you are writing in your blog, this may perhaps that is your major knowledge, skills and profession in real life in your country, By just correcting grammatical errors, Everybody will definitely love your blog, even if its from other country!

 

[ekliyan]

I feel like the titles are too long.

I don't know where you're getting your traffic from. Perhaps your aim is not to get organic traffic to begin with and perhaps you've opted for other sources. In the latter case, I guess the title length doesn't matter all that much.


As for some topics, tackling insurance probably won't get you far.

I may be wrong, but from my own experience, even as little as "safety tips" won't rank for shit (this is assuming you're trying to get organic traffic). It's because of how Google works, has worked for a few years now actually (resource). Perhaps in order to circumvent this problem, you could make it sound more personal, simple and practical. Right now it sounds like far-fetched overview and/or gauging of the potential issue, almost feels like typical troubleshooting tips that never work.


There are more potential issues, but there's plenty to fix so far...


Don't take any of this personally... This is just my unbiased observation not held back by "feelings".

Thank you for your feedback. it is very helpful for me.