Awan Cheyanne said:

This is a blog site I started several years ago with m grandchildren. I had one blog under the name of Grandma Simpson Kitchen in Roby Texas and added this second blog to the site.

I was paying for the blog until I stopped working on it. I am thinking of going back and writing on it again. I am just curious what you think of it and if you think I should do this again or not. It is a poetry blog and I do like writing poems about Halloween and different things like this. Anyhow here is the link to my blog:

https://gatelesspassage.wordpress.com/

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I like how the blog is organized and the outlook. I like the poem for "Mother's love". It ends with rhyming words and makes the poem musical when I read.

I also like reflections and cycle of life. The pictures go hand in hand with the posts especially "the eagles last flight"

I don't think there is any improvement I can suggest for you since I like it the way it is. I will leave the negative criticism for review experts.

mildredtabitha said:

I like how the blog is organized and the outlook. I like the poem for "Mother's love". It ends with rhyming words and makes the poem musical when I read.

I also like reflections and cycle of life. The pictures go hand in hand with the posts especially "the eagles last flight"

I don't think there is any improvement I can suggest for you since I like it the way it is. I will leave the negative criticism for review experts.

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That is so nice of you to review my site. I did try to choose a clam and relaxing format to use on the site. I enjoy this site very much and have not really posted on it in sometime. I want to go back to it and write again because I really enjoy writing poetry and I think it is sort of fun to try and rhyme the poems to make them flow or tie together. This is sort of a challenge if you do this and I enjoy that challenge very much.

Thank you again for reviewing my site. Please visit at anytime. I am sure there are a lot more poems on there that you might enjoy. My granddaughter loves my Halloween poems and I think I need to add a few of them soon to get into the spirit. I might work on one tomorrow and add it there.

I liked your blog (Gateless pass).
it has many short story to read but font size is small,layout and blog design is poor ,its tough to understand and iys should be colourfull with many Images should be attached to make it intresting .
However ,its content is good and fine along with its very intresting and enjoyable -pretty awesome nice contents!!,I liked thanks!!

Awan Cheyanne said:

That is so nice of you to review my site. I did try to choose a clam and relaxing format to use on the site. I enjoy this site very much and have not really posted on it in sometime. I want to go back to it and write again because I really enjoy writing poetry and I think it is sort of fun to try and rhyme the poems to make them flow or tie together. This is sort of a challenge if you do this and I enjoy that challenge very much.

Thank you again for reviewing my site. Please visit at anytime. I am sure there are a lot more poems on there that you might enjoy. My granddaughter loves my Halloween poems and I think I need to add a few of them soon to get into the spirit. I might work on one tomorrow and add it there.

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You are most welcomed. I will read more of your poems. How do you come up with words and rhymes? How long does it take you to write one poem and come up with a title?

mildredtabitha said:

You are most welcomed. I will read more of your poems. How do you come up with words and rhymes? How long does it take you to write one poem and come up with a title?

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When I was first sent to America to learn English I was intrigued with poetry and how it could rhyme. During the View Nam war many kids in school wrote poetry about the war, love and peace. I think this is when I was drawn into the rhyming aspect of poetry and started to use this style when I wrote poetry.

When I want to write a new poem I normally consider my title first for some reason. I like starting off with this and then working my way down the poem. I sort of form the images in my head of what I want my poem to be before I sit down and write it. This way it flows down the page and ends where I see it ending.

Vampires and witches to me are the dark side of Halloween or what people have made Halloween out to be. I love imagining the Dark Lord sitting on a throne in front of him are the living dead. The blood thirst and the way of living on forever is sort of intriguing to me and I know this can never be. That is what makes it so much fun to write some of these.

I did join a few poetry sites and took their poetry challenges which was quite fun to do. This really made you think about things and test a new style of writing poetry. As the ones I wrote about my daughter these came easy to me to express how I feel and the love we share for each other. So I guess it all depends on the mood and the feelings I have when I write a new piece of poetry. I really never thought I was that good and it was more of a hobby and a way to express myself.

I like the lay out of the poems. When I have a moment, I'll try and read them. The blue background colour is nice. It's nice to a poetry blog, haven't seen one in a while. No improvements yet! Keep writing!

xXInfectedXx said:

I like the lay out of the poems. When I have a moment, I'll try and read them. The blue background colour is nice. It's nice to a poetry blog, haven't seen one in a while. No improvements yet! Keep writing!

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Thank you so much. It was so nice of you to go by and take a look. I'm glad that you liked the site too.